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Sound by ~geeny:icongeeny:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2008-2009 ~geeny
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My headphones
They saved my life
Your tape
It lulled me to sleep
Björk


This self-portrait is about a year old.

Feel free to tell me how to improve this picture. Scrap y/n?

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~knalleknuten May 12, 2008, 6:00:10 PM
noooooo..its to sweet to scrap it!:)
(love the björk lyrics..one of MY songs:) )
you look so (verträumt;) )..the green light and the backlight adds this surreal, dreamlike feeling

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Jesus is a rock in the weary land, he's shelter in the time of storm.
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Mood: Cheerful *Miheer May 12, 2008, 6:14:57 PM
um, don't take it wrong. but you look too sexy to improve anything in the picture.
as for an idea you can make swirls(like the one in your journal) coming from behind along with music tones.
that would be cool!

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Mihir ---Yuhi Chala Chal Rahi...
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~IgnisFerroque May 12, 2008, 10:12:25 PM
Nice colors and quite expressive, not a scrap.

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Still jetzt, denn hier wohnt ein böser Gott...
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*dukecrescent May 13, 2008, 2:45:28 AM
There is just something sexy really sexy about this, hmmm

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“If you learn something and you do not share it you did not learn it”-Peter Andolfi
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~S3BR4 May 13, 2008, 4:21:35 AM
Hmm ich würd vielleicht dein Lächeln noch etwas optimieren und vielleicht die Sättigung deiner Hautfarbe etwas reduzieren das grün aber lassen. Vielleicht sieht ja auch ne andere Farbe als grün besser aus. Wenn du auch noch zeichnen kannst, würd ich mal versuchen ein paar elemente rein zu malen. Ist bei Polaroids sehr beliebt, gibts aber auch oft mit normalen Photos wo dan nachträglich mit Edding grafische Elemente eingefügt wären. Hier würde sich ja was zum Thema Musik anbieten :)

Für Scraps ists aber viel viel zu schade =)

Wenn du ganz mutig bist kannste ja mal an ein paar ausgewählte Leute das Bild in voller Größe schicken und sehen was die daraus machen. :D
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~CathleenParagon May 13, 2008, 7:01:48 AM
No

aaaah, green again :XD:
Like it, though

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Truth Has A Bat On Their Head!
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~schoenrainquelle May 13, 2008, 12:18:53 PM
It's nice picture, no doubt, the pose is great in my opinion.

What I would change is the background, erase the blue spot to the left and the blue area to the right side of your hip.

Anything else looks really fine, althought a bit green :D

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Live every day as if you intended to.

The Stranger: Do you have to use so many cuss words?
The Dude: What the f*** you talking about?
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=SteveyT Jun 12, 2008, 11:09:06 AM
I quite like it but if it was my photo I would've..

Made sure you're crossed legs were more central (maybe both your knees just out of shot), a slightly brighter or cleaner background and a smile!:D

Overall I like the pose and the photo well done!:)

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~geeny Jul 3, 2008, 3:10:16 PM
thanks!

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Nur einmal wieder so wie früher
Um die Häuser ziehen und mein Leben spüren
Doch diese Stadt gibt nicht viel her
Vielleicht liegts auch an mir, doch unsre Straßen bleiben leer.
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